Ireland rejects EU reform treaty
In this commentary I will clarify how I perceived the article ‘Ireland rejects EU reform treaty’. I will comment on the way the article is presented, how it is described and whether I liked or disliked the subject. The following paragraphs will make this more clear.
Style and context of the article
Looking at the style, grammar, vocabulary and order it is a pleasant article to read. Firstly, no difficult words are used or grammar mistakes made. This makes it easy to read through the text however it could have been a rather complicated article looking to the subject.
Secondly, the large white spaces that distinguish the different speakers contribute to the readability of the article while they not always introduce new topics as one would expect. The title, subtitles and introduction are printed in bold which divides the most important parts.
Finally, the article has a rather basic style. It is not printed in a variety of colours, different sizes and types of font or explicit pictures. This had led to a simple looking but pleasant to read text.
Layout of the article
The article exists out of one in (partly) bold printed introduction and two main paragraphs; ‘Uncharted territory’ and ‘Confusion’. Although it is a quit long text only two subtitles are used to structure the article.
The title and introduction are very informative. No other paragraph is needed to inform you about the subject of the article. The first paragraph let different speakers comment on the outcome of the referendum, e.g. Mr Barosso and the Irish prime minister Mr Cowen. The second and last paragraph is less clear. Mr Cowen accuses the
‘No-campaign’, hold in Ireland, of misrepresentation. According to him, voters have voted against issues that are not in the Lisbon Treaty but it is not made clear what these issues were. This would have made the article more informative.
Personal view
Personally, I find it a rather interesting topic. As we are now following the minor EUP this is part of our course. The Irish people do not want to adopt the Lisbon Treaty and to partly eliminate and adapt their own constitution. The article mentions that the outcome of the referendums will not harm the relationship between Ireland and the European Union and that both will continuo in putting effort in finding other ways to cooperate. In my opinion this will be hard. We already have seen cooperation with non-members like with Norway. Norway does not want to become part of the EU but is part of the European Economic Area which creates a common market with all member states. But this seems impossible in case of Ireland.
The article in general was well written but I would have liked some more detailed information such as the issues the Irish people have voted against. Which issues provided problems? Next Friday (02-10) there will be another referendum in Ireland, maybe they will accept it this time….
Link to the article:
http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/europe/7453560.stm